My 5 Errors in my paper
1.
Error: The second reaction pressures brings to us is mental reactions.
Problem: Pressures, should not have a s at the end, and some rewording.
Correction: The second reaction to pressure is mental reactions.
2.
Error: We have the natural tendency to think, “I better hurry”, “I am running out of time”, or “Im taking too much time on this question, better guess on it”.
Problem: The commas should go in the quotations. also Im should be changed to I am or I'm. Some rewording as well.
Correction: We have the natural tendency to think "i better hurry," I am running out of time," or "I am taking too much time on this question, I better make a guess"
3.
Error: We also wouldn’t feel rush, or uncomfortable while taking the test and. we would do their best and that’s what everyone wants.
Problem: hahaha.. a lot. There shouldn't be a period after and. As well, there is no need for a comma before the or. Their, should we changed to our(because Im trying to include myself in the paper). Also that's should be changed to thats or that is(there is not possession)
Correction: We also wouldn't feel rushed or uncomfortable while taking the test. We would do our best and that is what everyone wants.
4.
Error: We will take more time to analyze, think, read, write, which will increase our performance, scores, and knowledge.
Problem: there should be a "and" put after read.
Correction: We will take more time to analyze, think, read, and write, which will increase our performance, scores, and knowledge.
5.
Errors: Even with all those other worrys, we yet worry more about time.
Problem: worrys is incorrect. It should be worries. As well needs some reworking.
Correction: Even with all those worries, we yet seem more worried about time.
Please correct me if I am wrong. Some are very confusing.
My feelings about Peer Reviews
I really liked the peer reviews. It really helped me see some of the big errors I had in my opinion editorial. It also gave me ideas of how to structure, organize, and improve my paper. Many of these ideas i didn't see, and were great ways to improve my paper! By having 4 other people review my paper, I found all the things wrong with my paper and can see if my paper was efficient and if it was worth writing. If my peer reviewers like it, then my audience will like it! thats logic!
